There are some excellent comments here. You'll obviously need to include specific exemplification from your products. I felt that you could have discussed the romantic/emotional narrative that seems to me to run throughout your idea, some very traditional values about what one should find at the end of a journey. Some sense of whether your audience felt that the three products made up a successful and coherent marketing strategy would have been useful.
There are some excellent comments here. You'll obviously need to include specific exemplification from your products.
ReplyDeleteI felt that you could have discussed the romantic/emotional narrative that seems to me to run throughout your idea, some very traditional values about what one should find at the end of a journey.
Some sense of whether your audience felt that the three products made up a successful and coherent marketing strategy would have been useful.